Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)
①The chart clearly illustrates the percentage of the different traveling purposes of students in a vertain university. ② According to the data given, we can easily see that the percentage of enjoying fascinating scenery is the highest, reaching roughly 37%, while relieving pressure, making friends, as well as cultivating independence account for about 33%, 9% and 6% respectively.
②The contributing factors responsible for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows.② First and foremost, with the rapid growth of the economy, the living standards of the Chinese people is also growing. It makes sense that traveling is affordable to a growing number of college students.③ What’s more, it must be stressed that the present situation, to a certain degree, stems from the benefits of traveling, including enriching their experience, upgrading their eyesight and enlarging their circle of acquaintances. ④ Last but not the least, traveling is also the best possible outlet for easing the young generation’s stress and anxiety, which is another significant factor that cannot be ignored.
Taking into account the points discussed so far, we can conclude that travelling not only offers college students a broader perspective of life, but is conducive to their psychological health as well.